|Reviews for Further Than The Sky|
| Y. S. Wong 5/20/13 . chapter 11
I am back to catch up with FTTS at last! Maybe!
Can I sleep with Leiter and Liz too? Oh, and then you pull this crap. Sirius is not gay?! Interesting reversal here of the pressures real homosexuals actually face.
Psychoboobs is my new favorite character. I look forward to seeing you abuse everyone with her in the tournament.
Oho. Now Nana's piloting an AMS. Not only that, she saves the day. I bet you wouldn't hesitate to kill her if you had the chance though, would you?
| Eri Rein to Ero-sama 5/20/13 . chapter 6
Ah, it's a good thing you got picked again so I can finally catch up on to this one hehe...
Errr... the chapter reeks of despair... deaths here and there. You like killing off characters aren't you? XD
| Iceleaf 5/15/13 . chapter 19
I think your writing has been getting better.
| Ryou Arubin 4/30/13 . chapter 19
Haiz, perspective, perspective. Great job in fleshing out both pilots' and normal civilians' views. It's really tough to be an AMS pilot, really.
So many references you made in this chapter lol.
Tin Man 3 - I suppose you are referring to the character from the Wizard of OZ? XD
His phone vibrated in his pocket, playing an obnoxiously loud 16-Bit rendition of what seemed to be the theme song of a show about a blue robotic cat from the future saving his owner's ancestor from poverty. - Childish Zint, kiddy Zint.
I am sensing some insane foreshadowing from the part where Precia and Zint talked about the movie. I hope I am not overthinking it...
Man, their backstory are really depressing. Can't help but to sympathize with them...
That cliffhanger! I can't wait to see them in action. Dish out the next chapter soon!
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 14
...I've decided the puns stop until I see Thurston back in action.
So, apparently, Deus and his gang just seem to want to destroy the world in search of more Evoliurs, and are pretty much the direct cause of crazy in the world. Who'd of thunk it?
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 13
...Not this time.
Oh, man! Why? I read the quote line, and I had no clue what it meant, and now I feel bad. After all that, AFTER ALL THAT! Yeah, I suppose if he did pull through unscathed, he would be Marty Stu material, but come on!
So I'm guessing that everything up to this point was the Dulcinea Effect? The see the past present future thing? I don't like it if it kills off main characters!
Wonderfully written chapter, and this ends the first arc, I suppose? I must keep going.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 12
Wait. If Holly and Thurston wind up getting married, won't that be an en of Daze- I just reminded myself about Skool.
Well, after these last few chapters, I am caught off guard by several things. Sirius Li Gae is Sirius Li not? Mark is one of the tested humans? Amun is NOT the most deranged killing machine in the universe, but still close? I must find out more.
And Nana is now a mech pilot. Okay.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 8
He- Well, I don't think I have any material to use on this one. Someone finally capped Cap? Eh...
Oh my goodness, this chapter was packed. I was absolutely puzzled by the start of the chapter. But by the end, it just shows how messed up the villains are. Mr. God-complex from the Machine is straight crazy, and I'm pretty sure everything they did to and for Thurston was just to punch him in the kidneys by making him take such painful measures. Oh, they're going down.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 7
So much is happening to Thurston. He has been taken prisoner, learned of the other Beldona theories, and even met the enemy's commander. This must be quite a sho-*electrocuted
Well, if there was ever a doubt that the ruler of the evil army had a God-complex before this chapter, they have been thoroughly shattered by now. The guy pretty much calls himself "God." This leads me to believe his eventual defeat is sealed, since most people who claim godhood wind up horribly humiliated, defeated, or dead.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 5
It- it looks like Sk- sniff. That Skool's oooooo- oh, I can't do it! I thought that guy was cool! *rushes off shedding manly tears*
I liked and hated this chapter. It was done well for the most part, but for the entire first half of the chapter, Skool goes and connects to his sister, gives her a memento, proposes to his girlfriend, and then makes a pinky promise to come back. For those well versed in the genres, this and his extreme vengeance was a giant red flag. They practically scream "Don't get too attached to this guy; he's going to die before the day ends."
Perhaps the fact that he was always a different type of fighter foreshadowed the fact that he was temporary. But I still liked the guy.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 4
Poor Terra. Crippled, orphaned, and unless I'm reading into the names of the parents too much, destined to not marry Skool since her name would not be a pun. It must be Terrable- *sees over 500 missiles* oh.
So Amun is leading the charge, and is a maniacal killing machine? Looks like Skool might be facing his past sooner than expected.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 2
The village sure wanted to hunt down Holly. People really act strangely during the Holly Daze seaso- *shot
This chapter had a lot of development for its characters. But nuking Solomon? How will this end?
So many pun names. I laughed, I sighed, I even groaned.
| McMicah 4/18/13 . chapter 1
Wow. Thurston managed do do all that without a single day of training! He didn't even have a drill instructor. *shot
All terrible joking aside, this is a pretty interesting story so far. I'll read and respond to more when I can.
| Ryou Arubin 4/10/13 . chapter 18
Great chapter yo. With Nana following Thurston's footsteps and ideals.
Thurston's death really had an impact on Nana, but I am glad that she has come to terms with it and decided to move on.
And wow, her piloting skills. I really want to see a fight between fellow Evoliurs. XD
| Ryou Arubin 4/10/13 . chapter 17
Hm, seems like the new characters are getting more attention and scenes in this new arc.
Heh, I guess the theme for this chapter is "Secret".
Though Cipher hardly talks, I am guessing he would be one heck of a pilot when he sorties with Ashura.
Really, really curious about Zero's and Cipher's identity.
Hahaha! I knew it was going to be hilarous, but well done, Zint! I am rooting for the both of you! :D
I guess all organisations have a dark side to them. Now, I wonder what kind of dark secrets does the St. Gladios Army have?
Midas sure is sensitive when it comes to talking about his past. I really wonder what sort of incident it was.
Woah. The last part. Looks like there's going to be one heck of a faceoff in the next chapter. Onward!