Wow...it's haunting sad descriptive captivating and PERFECT!

Short but descriptive and well-written, I like this piece!

This is really good. As always, I don't need to say it but, it is brilliant. Very dark but I love the attention to detail and imagery. :-D

Very lovely descriptive piece, and you certainly weren't lying when you said it was bleak! The only spelling mistake I saw was mismatch ('miss-match') and it was very well-written. Kudos :)