does the shift-enter/enter thing not work for formatting anymore? I haven't used the document manager in forever.

in regard to the actual piece, I really liked the duality of it, the whole twisted mirror thing. it feels almost like a dark fairy tale that rises to a crescendo of horror. or something like that. point is, I liked where you took it and where it went.

This was so good, don't think I've read a poem about this sort of theme before and I enjoyed reading it! :)

Ah, thanks for the explanation for what bursa is, I sucked at Science in school so I would never have known what it was.

This was good actually, as all your writing is! :)