OH BLOODY HELL-WHAT HAPPENS? Colin is in love with her and he was upset about the kiss BUT shouldn't he have known that Herin kissed her and she didn't want it? DAMN THIS STORY IS JUST WAAAAAAAY TOO GOOD! You have a MARVELOUS AND AMAZING JOB WRITING IT-NOW I HAVE 3 FAVES OF YOURS and will DEFINITELY BE WATCHING FOR MORE FROM YOU!

OMG some INTENSITY HAS REARED ITS HEAD! Now I know I don't like Diane and Alyssa! I LOVED it when she knocked Diane down the stairs then stepped on her-THAT WAS GREAT! I also LOVED the fight between her and Harin-CRAP SHE IS A SPITFIRE OR HELLCAT-whichever is good! I like Colin but there are questions regarding him-Is Alyssa actually his mate or just a girlfriend? Is he secretly in love with her? Why is it seems he is easier on her? DAMN CAN'T GET ENOUGH ALREADY!

OH HELL-another spicy female here-I LOVE it when a girl has spit! I can already tell I don't think I am gonna like Diane! Can hardly wait to meet the rest of the pack!

OMG-BROKE MY HEART! ALREADY QUESTIONS assail my mind AND CAPTURED COMPLETELY! SHORT AND BEAUTIFULLY DONE!