So pretty.

Good imagery, well-paced, plot might be a bit used but I think you really pulled it off.

Thanks!

-DEB

This is pretty good! Im guessing by the context that this a one shot. Very well written and I like your style. I could feel the tension between the two of them especially in the setting they were in. I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

This was very sweet, especially because I had expected to be more lust-fueled. However, I was very pleasantly surprised at how much chemistry you managed to put into the story with such few words. Your writing has a flow to it that I like. :)

I am a sucker for the old attracted to a friend story! I liked this a lot. I liked how they felt about each other in it, and the way it was not a perfect relationship. I loved the kiss. Is there more or just a one shot?