| Reviews for Mars is a Woman's World |
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Reiz16 5/1/13 . chapter 13Good story. Was kind of sad though, because I wanted him to see Lucy again. Plus, the ones who took the sleeping pills will just die in 2 months, anyway. |
Reiz16 5/1/13 . chapter 12The light people sound interesting. |
Reiz16 5/1/13 . chapter 11They get to meet once a month? Cool. |
Reiz16 5/1/13 . chapter 10I like their secret. |
Reiz16 5/1/13 . chapter 9Pandora seems very mean. |
Reiz16 5/1/13 . chapter 8The side effects of the pills dound strange and interesting. |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 7"That's it, sexy, show me what you got." lol. Well, the ending was terrifying. :( |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 6Well, that was an unfortunate turn of events. |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 5It was smart for John to ask for tapes. |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 4Well, I guess there's going to be a big fight. |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 3Wow. The women are so tough on the men. |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 2Good to see John treats his wife right. Er, well the way she WANTS to be treated, at least. |
Reiz16 4/30/13 . chapter 1Ooh! The Martian ladies gunna get John! |
Punslinger 5/6/12 . chapter 13It's nice to read the kind of happy ending I was hoping for. Good job of resolving conflicts and bringing it all home with no loose ends left dangling. |
Punslinger 4/24/12 . chapter 10The story line is still unfolding nicely. Many other fantasy yarns I've read, such as "The Lord of the Rings" and most vampire series, get off to a good start, then become dull and repetitive, as if the author feels that the narrative can coast along on momentum. But your lively writing style and control of the characters and action continue to hold my interest. |