OMG. Kinda shocking (I'm a pacifist) but I still like the ray of hope you managed to put in there - the surviving cat, the train 'leaving to heaven' (well that's how I'm interpreting it), Mrs. Marcie...

Text flow is nearly flawless, and there's only minor typos ("silver of hope" think it should be "sliver") but they don't disturb much.

Good job on this! Keep writing!