update

Are you going to update this story again?

I really liked this chapter. I think it shows a lot of growth for Kristoffer's charater and the relationship with Rory. I also liked the everyday life that was happening in the beginning. Well worth the wait.

I like this chapter it flows very well. I was hoping for a little bit stronger reaction between Lily and Kristoffer. But perhaps with their first touch or kiss the cosmos will realign. I was wondering if you ever thought of posting your works on a website called Wattpad. I just found it last week from another author and I have to say it is amazing. They seem to have a bigger audience and it is free. Just thought I would mention it because I think your work would do really well there. I hope that you can update again soon.

update soon please!

While like the interaction between Kristoff and Erik and I do like the Lilly character and am interested in learning her background story. I am not sure I like the feel I get with Erik towards Rory. Some how it came across to me as though Erik is starting to get tired of Rory and making it seem as though she is really insecure of herself. I thought she got over most if not all of her insecurities with her and Erik's story. It just didn't come across as he is in love with her as much as he once was or is supposed to be. Maybe you did this on purpose to set up for future drama between those two or maybe I just took it wrong. I can't wait for the next update to see what happens next. I hope that you had a great holiday and will have a great new year.

And there's Kristofer's love interest! Can't wait, I really love his character!

can't wait for your next update!

Amazing! as usual can't wait for a update

You have done an outstanding job starting off Kristoff's story showing the tortured aritist personality that makes him who he is. I also like that you can write about another character and not make it two dimensional but life like. You have a talent to write about different characters and keep true to their personality. So many writers will write different stories with different characters but all the characters will be the same two d cut out of the rest. You started strong and can't wait to see where this goes. I also like the forshadowing you have done. Update again soon. Again great job.

I'm so glad you're doing a story on Kristoffer now! He was one of the best characters in 18th Floor Balcony. I guarantee you, if both of these were real books, they'd be in my room on my bookshelf right now and if it were a movie, I'd be one of the first ones to see it. It's like my obsession with Twilight all over again :) I can't wait to read more!

great start! :D

I love the bond between Kristoffer and Erik. It tied really well to their relationship in 18th floor balcony.

Can't wait to read more!

Can't wait for an update!

Good set up for what is to come. I really liked Kristoffer in 18th Floor Balcony and I am really happy you've given him his own story! Here's to many quick updates!