This is so poetic. I can understand the overall message of what you mean. I don't think I ever wanted to "grow up". Even now.

such a beautiful way to look at a universal question. i love the way you're wording things. "nothing exists anymore, my mind is gone, it's exhausted." that line is so good, it stuck out to me as incredible. i love this.

This is amazing! I love the words you used and the whole thing is just amazing.

wow, this is stunning.

the emotion and darkness of this is so powerful. and the way you use words is amazing.

this line: 'nothing exists anymore, my mind is gone, it's exhausted, done with, the once magnificent thoughts that filled my brittle mind have now jaded and come to be nothing but empty memories.' is completely beautiful, in a tragic way.

you're amazing at writing :)