Just leaving another review in hopes of numbers attracting more readers. (: Still love it.

A late night read as I procrastinate on my paper. Really liking it so far. (:

It's a very beautiful ending. The imageries here are very nicely done. Thanks for writing this.

This was really, really beautiful!

I love this whole story but this chapter was really strong and powerful emotionally.

You have some lovely imagery at the end, with the 'quickening dark' and the starlight on the web. Stunning

I don't think Clayton should love anyone more than Darien, but that's just me, because Darien's my favorite :p

Anyway, I will read this *again*

Kudos

Suki .

Loved this chapter. It was very cute and well written.

Oh that inevitable separation! Don't know if I can take it. But not all stories have to have happy ending, right? Bittersweet ending can sometimes be more appropriate. However, I do wonder where is Clayton's home? Or is it a symbolic home as in "when you are comfortable in your own skin then you are home". Can't wait to find out.

P.S. Good luck with job hunting.

Oh, it's going to be sad! However much I love to read sad and poignant, I never want stories to reach that point and end. I think you chose the right time to introduce that element (of Darien having to return), it keeps me not wanting it to happen though! And I'm interested to know what he means by Clayton going home.

Wow I wrote a whole review from my phone! Good luck with the job hunting!

suki .

Oh, it's going to be sad! However much I love to read sad and poignant, I never want stories to reach that point and end. I think you chose the right time to introduce that element (of Darien having to return), it keeps me not wanting it to happen though! And I'm interested to know what he means by Clayton going home.

Wow I wrote a whole review from my phone! Good luck with the job hunting!

suki .

aww, this story is so sweet and strange. i love it!

Hehe, this is so cute! Anyway, I liked the conversation with peter, it seemed pretty realistic to me, and of course anything to do with Darien and Clayton together was adorable, so basically, I loved the chapter :) gold stars for you, yay

They are really cute I think we all need a bit of sappy romance now and then and this is lovely.

The conversation with Peter was well done and touching.

I really enjoyed this chapter.

Suki .

I think the scene with Peter is pretty real. I am glad that you start to write about why Clayton wanted to kill himself - I was wondering about that. Now I found that he was lonely and his parents seemed to be very distant, uninterested and preoccupied.

Darn, Darien is so cute - I just want to squeeze him. I love how Clayton softened up and started to relax. He was pretty wound up in the beginning - well, I guess you must be if you are thinking about killing yourself.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh, I love that Darien can talk to any living thing!

There's something really warm and comforting about this story, I can't work out whether it's the way you've written Darien as this completely loving and trusting character or something else. Anyway, I really enjoy reading it.

Suki

Awe, I like iiiiit Update, update, updaaaaate, please :) you know you waaaaanna.