Great fic! I love it !

I really like this, it's an amazing story and I hope you get over your little block soon! Looking forward to next chapter, but don't feel pressured or anything

I finally got around to reading this! Being in school is lame! It takes away from spending time on the things that matter! Haha Seriously, I was looking forward to having enough time to sit and read it all. Read it on the bus ride to and from campus.
Anyway, that was one INTENSE scene. The love and passion between these guys is incredible. I mean, they've know each other for days, and the connection they share is adorable and amazing. They need each other and want each other and you make that clear. Really enjoy these two.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

OMG! Loved this sooooo soooo very much! :D
Beautifully written and just... wow! :D
Can't wait for the next update! _

I like your writing, so I hope you continue to do so, it distracts me from my headaches. I like the story line but I think it needs a little drama, which considering that Gabriel is going to contact people soon within the story, that will add the drama anyway. Hope that makes sense. Keep going! Its really good, you got me hooked. :)

This is great! :) It wasn't disappointing at all; I loved it! It was absolutely wonderful! :D

Amazing, as ever. I admire the skill you have in making your characters so real and I'm glad I stumbled upon this story a loooooong time ago. Good read:)

Yipee. Connor and Gabriel are back. Thank you for continuing their story.

Shooooooo-weeee. Super hot. Really really hot. And clothes were on. Man they're hot ._.
They're so sweet together, at dinner- ohhmygosh that was so cuuuute! Haha they're adorable :3

The article...made me kinda sad. I honestly forgot all about his Hollywood life, then I was like ohh, right. Damn. Cuz I don't want anything to happen to separate them...their own little world is too perfect D:

AND ohgoodness what do you mean you hope it's not disappointing? I doubt I'm speaking for myself only here when I say you could neverr disappoint. Like. Ever. Don't make me poke you...hard.

I'm sorry to hear- wel, read- that you're feeling stuck. I hope you feel un-stuck soon! Being stuck isn't a nice feeling ): you can always message me to rant (:

Take care & you are wonderful;
Blade

Aw this chapter made me very happy XD I want them to stay in their bubble, I know that feeling so well.
The undercurrent you've got going on and hint at with Gabriel saying he doesn't quite fit it, makes my heart ache, 'how can he not see!' I want to shout. It has me needing mooore! :)
I love Connor's warm, secure family, in it you've created the perfect foil for Gabriel's troubled past. This is what he needs.

I'm really looking forward to the next, and because I think this is such a memorable and defined story, even though you might not update for a while I'm never lost with what happened before, I know exactly and there are very few stories I feel that way about.

Sukix

Well done Dawn! Hope you can update often. It's such a delight to read your work... My heart just melts with the rapport between Connor and Gabriel. Keep well!

Would that actually be possible? For the lorry to take half a car with it it'll need to be going at like train speed, but lorry's top speed is less than that of a car. Unless it there was something at the other side of the car preventing it from moving...

Sorry, these are just the kinda things I think about when reading/writing. I have a scientific mind ;

Oh, so sad! Their parents dying was so awful and I really felt for both of them reading this.
Ah interesting about Connor and Angus! More? XD

I really love that you posted these memories.

Sukix

Oh, I love the last three lines!
And this too:
'Once more he was reminded that Gabriel was an accomplished actor. His outward appearance might be calm but his white knuckles betrayed his real feelings.' I think you show that really well.

I'm excited to read the next chapter!

Sukix

ps. I really thought this was on my favorites list- I am such an idiot- that shall be remedied right now!

Ch 19: I like how straight and to the point this chapter was. Auntie Morag always seems to have and answer or solution for everything. And when she doesn't, she'll listen to you and just make you feel better. It is nice to have a character like that.

Ch 20: I really enjoyed this chapter. I love that you let us into his memories, and even wrote is from his young perspective, rather than it being some flashback from the perspective of his current age. Goodness the tears almost came, but I managed to hold them back in fear that my roommate would question me. You should do more memory chapters. I would love to see when and how Connor knew he was gay. That would be really interesting. It has been a while since I've read one of your posts and I got to read two! Made my day, but now I have studying to do for an exam.
As always, lovely posts, and I look forward to the next. Have a wonderful night.