This was great, I so agree with Cory. I remember when I was younger and I'd read those trashy romance novels and think "YES, this is how it should be." and now much older and much wiser I know that if it's not like a romance novel it doesn't mean it's not still really good. Thanks for the walk down memory lane and maybe a few chuckles.

Very funny story, realistic too. I like it a lot. I like how they negotiate. Not that that is always realistic, but who cares. Funny and sweet. Nice.

This story is pretty interesting, but I can't help but feel it would have been better as part of a larger story. The whole expectations vs. experience scheme would have been fascinating for a novella, encompassing all aspects of life, not just the sexual.

But I do appreciate the way you tell a story in a non-linear way, jumping around and back and forth based on the theme.

awww that was cute, and well done. Gives you a lot to think about.

That was kind of adorable.

:3, this whole time I waS IMAGINING MY MOM'S ROMANCE NOVELS (tHE ONES WITH fABIO AND SOME BUSTY CHICK ON THE COVER)

Sorry about the caps lock. I put it on by accident and didn't have the energy to fix it.

I think you achieved an incongruity, and in a realistic way as well. This story just had a certain 'flow' to it that made everything sort of work, you know?

Happy Holiday swag

IT WORKS LOL. This was funny as hell, loved how u kept to the theme, u just made my day :)

I liked this :) It was short and sweet and mundane in a good way :D