wow it toke me ten days to finish this but it was worth it it was i dont know one of the best poems i have EVER read

I especially appreciated the cow molestation- don’t see that much in literature any more. And I’m glad Vassex.Z didn’t really say that; way to claim the moral high ground!

Fantastic chapter, I especially enjoyed the way Suzie’s father treated her and the scene with the Death guards and Principal.

I didn’t even know it was near an ending. I was wondering how you would end it; I couldn’t think of any particular quest that needed to be done or a problem to solve. I’m still waiting for a sinner, island, and a manifold. Guess I’ll have to wait for book 2. Thanks for an adventure like no other. Now it’s back to the cruel world.

Very impressive long-jump action.

So much humory goodness… I wonder, does an adult cereal Snap Crackle Pop and Buzz?

For a while there I thought that Squid monster and Suzie might be headed toward an epic romance but I guess some girls just can’t see past the whole rape issue.

"Tell him about the penises!" Finally there's something us Earth men can be proud of! Great chapter.

I thought the next mission after the health class would involve the ambassawarriors capturing a male human. Interesting naked recruit. Blade closet? I want one. Great story.

I never know where the action is headed. Suzie’s dad really is turning into a role-model. I enjoyed that line from the alien guy about group showering. Best sack race ever. I'm intrigued by Suzie’s partner- the rugged individualist.

So many weird and wonderful things going on in Suzie's life; I like the long jump jealousy and the rich girl showing off a bruise from where her mom hit her! It was probably bigger and better that everyone else’s abuse. I wish 1 gods would teach me indefinite articles.

No let down, this story just gets better. I loved the video game part, the nerd stealing the spaceship, great line about Suzie needing to get introspective, and the group shower… too much stuff to list. This wild story is easily one of the funniest things I’ve ever read.

If the New York Times wrote more articles about fire-breathing curvy space women in space bikinis then maybe people would read… as it is, why bother. This story is epic! I love your characters, the dialog and the high school experience. I feel Suzie's pain.