Cliffhanger! Please write more! Also please message me if you'd like to read the story I've started to write. It's not on my account because I write it on my iPod. And the readers that I've had thoroughly enjoy it. PLEASE WRITE MORE! ;-;

Grah! UPDATE. Also! I LOVE!

YOU DICK! FUCK RAPHAEL. FUCK GABRIEL. FUCK FUCKING ARCHANGEL MICHAEL THEY CAN ALL LOSE THEIR FUCKING GRACE FOR ALL I CARE! FUCK!

I am sincerely sorry for that outburst. I love this story and I cant wait to find out what happens next.

This is a really interesting story line.

As far as I can tell, you have a gift for being able to describe things in a way that isn't boring, so try to incorporate that into your writing a little bit more if you are able, just by little side comments about setting and whatnot :)

What? NO! WHY DO YOU HATE ME?

asdfghjkl when I saw that part that Cora corrected herself I almost went-That isn't right! :U I should tell her.

Then i realised that she corrected herself.

Other than that little...tidbit, it was quite a good chapter! C:

u I havn't reveiwed in a while, my lovely, i'm so sorry! :C

Great job on this chapter. And yes, I agree with you. Ramiel's brothers are major douches. :B

Grahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hes falling? Seriously? Wahhhhhhhhhh

Describe his brothers more! I only got an idea of what the blonde one looked like.

that and longer chapters, s'il vous plaît. :)

Update soon s'il vous plaît!

-Turquoise

WHAT THE FUCK? RAMIE IS DYING? WHY DO YOU HATE ME?

I want an Angel! Where can I get One?

WOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! _YOU UPDATED! NOW UPDATE AGAIN

Lol cute joke. Awwww! So what happens next? Will she die? Will they meet again?

Wow. Sorry if it was my fault I didn't get this chapter. Did I miss it?

started reading this yesterday and i am already about to start chapter 13! ramiel and cora are so cute! this story is very very addicting! thank you for posting it