The emotion in this piece was intensely real. I felt very bad for the narrator, though, and I felt like I could easily relate to her. I was never bullied like this, but I recognize her train of thought. It is familiar and real to me.

I like how the narrator keeps the idea of revenge in the back of her mind, though. That made me smile. I feel like there is so much more left to the imagination that this could turn into a very interesting novella.

Velvet.

A male bullied by the opposite gender? That's quite interesting. Is she older than him, by any chance?