When will I see a chapter I haven't yet read? This was good, but I want to see more!

Intresting

Awesome prologue.

Like the new chapter. Brilliant!

Change of pace... Good, but short.

Rather intresting. Everything seems to be so random and unpredictable. I like it.

WOW! That's some crazy shit that went down in Erik's dream!

I'll read more.

Thanks for the read, keep up the fantastic work, my friend

-BADFELLAS INC.

This is a damn good story thus far. I'm interested in reading more of this and finding out what's going to happen next.

I'm actually a registered member of this site, its just that I'm too lazy to sign in, well maybe not lazy isn't the word. Its more like forgot my password.

Anyways, keep up the awesome work!

-BADFELLAS INC.

your story is pretty interesting so far- everyone has brought some kind of back story and bagage with them.

i loved the part when that woman refered them all as loins raise by zebras,kinda makes me wonder... i can't wait to find out why they are there.

update soon!

AJ

So far this story has taken a very interesting turn I am interested in seeing more. Your writing is...intriguing feels like i'm reading something that I wrote myself. I take back my comment on cliches

I like this so far, however to me the (almost) last part seemed to be made up of entire Cliches, however taking into consideration that this did happen to be a dream (sort of) I think that it was appropriate however you may want to tone it a bit down. Kudos.

Really enjoying this. The story is original and enjoyable and the characters are intiguing. Looking forward to seeing what is going to happen next.