A look to something positive with a negative undertone, and really who can blame you. However you have wishes; The Law of Attraction is your way...

I think your last two lines are the most important...nice poem.

i think freedom is what we all wnd up searching, because there's no better feeling than it! Super beautiful, i'm your fan.

-K.S's

"Because freedom/ Doesn't come free." There's so much in those two lines, I think they really sum up the whole poem and then more. I love how all the words used are simple, and so it's easy to comprehend, though the topic is one that can be delved on.