OMG this is fantastic.

Kitty

I like. It's mysterious, with just the right amount of fantasy and strange enough to make it completely unique. The good strange, not the bad strange ()

It really shows that the hero might be the one bathed in darkness, and the evil can be painted in light.

Hee Hee...

The dark angel and the heavenly demon... INSPIRATION!

Hey, if I ever get off my lazy ass, can I make my own version of this? I'll include that it was you and everything. Plllleeaassee?

I love this! This is exactly how I feel when I am about to, or in the process of, writing a story! .

i like it. very true...

Another awesome poem, can't wait to read more of your poetry.