Nice story! :)

this is really good can't wiat for the next chapter

Oh no you did not! *sobs* Cam is the best! him and Ari are the best... wait am minute *lightbulb!* manybe if Ari doesnt have him i can? just a suggestion lol

Um...

SUPERRRRR KILIGGGGGGGG!

HAHAHAHAHHA!

WRITE MORE!

THANKS!

wow, claire must really like camreon.

i love it please update soon

WAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA!

I'm so kiliging! hihihihihihihi! XD

Hey hun! :)

You're doin' a good job at updating. 18 chapters. :O Buti ka pa. -_-" Anyways, I stalk you every night for a chapter, so DON'T STOP! :D

Now for the mean part. Just kidding. . Critique lang. A little less dialogue and characters would take you a long way. :) It's kinda confusing, haha.

BUT, I love it bery much. :D

Take care.

- A

i liked it though, it needed more seth in it ;)

Naaaaw! Cam is the cutest! I love him already! Please, please updaqte soon! You have done such a good job! Keep on writing!

I was looking back over your story and realised you dedicated this chapter to me... it took me a while haha! Thankyou sol much that is awfully sweet of you!

yay,

i can so see them together

please update soon

yay

she is with cam again

haha, jesse is so funny. i gotta find a guy like that

please update soon

I like Chase and Jesse... They do seem a little cheesy but I think thas what some stories need! I liked this chapter but it is a little short :)

This is going good so far, i like it... It's funny to me, i like the line 'ill do something very illegal to you', it's something i would say!

One small little thing i'm going to comment on is towards the end when you're describing Nathan. You slip up and say Brandon.

'My sister wasn't interested at first, because she was more focused on her studies but Brandon was really patient and very sweet to her'

It's just a small little thing, i didn't even notice till it went back to Nathan.

But, whatever, it's cool. Like i said, i'm liking the story so far. Love the names, by the way... :-)