|Reviews for Something About Pseudonyms and Krispy Kreme|
| heal me forever 12/5/12 . chapter 1
| Chocolate Lover 6/10/12 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this is like a cross of Paper Towns and Serendipity and Pride and Prejudice. MR. DARCY! Haha. So, anyway, aside from a few shifting tenses (sometimes you used present tense when the past would be more appropriate) your grammar is great. And the whole plot itself is amusing; I was smiling the whole time. Especially when he kept describing her as pretty. :)) Their banter is witty as well, like your other piece (I'm guessing you incorporate witty banter in all your romance stories; I mean, they're really fun to read - but hard write sometimes, because it's difficult to think of comebacks :). Your characters just jump off the page, for lack of a better term. I mean, short story characters are the most difficult to write because there's not much room for development but you pulled it off. Keep writing! :D
| Casper Hauntelle 12/31/11 . chapter 1
Hey ! It's me again. I didn't even have a clue I've been reading two of your stories consecutively. All I could think was 'Krispy Kreme and Darcy in one sentence? CLICK!'
I don't even have to tell you how much I liked this one.
Tell me, though, is this Damien guy for real? Or did you completely make him up?