Aww, it's so sad.
Your description of what was happening was really good.
I wanted to keep reading from the very first words.
Well done.

-TheClassicCriminal

Thank you for recommending this to me, I really enjoyed it, and the end made me tear up a little. Excellent story.

Very well written! Very descriptive and a very good setting! I admired the ending and very last words! the plot very well displayed! Great piece of work

Catchy beginning. Awesome word choice and great story overall.

Very well written. Awesome, I loved it.