Okay, so throughout this entire story I'm smiling at the screen, occasionally nodding and/or laughing. I loved it, obviously.

It was cute, and cheesy! ;D I'm sure someone already said that but I couldn't resist... I really liked it although I agree that the dude man was a little bit underdeveloped. You are awesum! Keep it up!

Ok this was one of the funniest things iv ever read! :)

It's a good story :)

The cheese element makes it rather funny, i love cheese!

And the cheese guy seems sweet... in this day and age, who isn't on their phone a lot?

I really want to eat some cheese now...

Lol.

Great story. So stealing cheese is the new flirting? Must remember that for next time. XP

I love the 'cheese-guy', he's so damn hilarious. And Lucy is so funny the way she didn't know she was 'flirting' with him.

Nice story.