|Reviews for Nephilim|
| Fiery Dancer 5/15/13 . chapter 5
So yeah... Just re read this again please update?
| Fiery Dancer 5/14/13 . chapter 6
So I don't know why I haven't read this yet - but this story is fantastic! This start is definitely intriguing, I've got an idea but CANNOT wait to read more... Pease tell me you haven't stopped writing this? I LOVE the interaction between Blake and Kara - please please please please update?
| Guest 4/22/13 . chapter 6
This is really nice! Are you going to update this ever again? I don't understand why this story has only gotten 12 reviews, it's good.
| Calliope 7/22/12 . chapter 6
This story is amazing! I absolutely love your writing style and plot lines, both here and in Alex: White Tiger. Please update soon!
| Unicornswag 7/8/12 . chapter 6
I love this story! You are such a great writer and I can't wait to read where this story goes next! :)
| Chryse 7/6/12 . chapter 6
I'm so glad to see another update for this! The idea of Blake facing a bunch of Sons kind of makes me wonder if it would turn out so clear cut as Kara assumes. I'm really interested to see where this goes!
| These Rays Of Light 1/30/12 . chapter 5
This is very, very well written - and it is very gripping. I love the way the characters are interacting with each other. You have managed to create a unique fantasy world fit very well with our modern world. I am certainly looking forward to your next update.
| serahei 1/30/12 . chapter 5
Please update soon!
Blake & Kare are real cool pair ;)
| Chryse 1/30/12 . chapter 5
Your writer's block isn't evident! You keep building tension, and I keep waiting for the cloud to burst. Harley's bit is quite interesting, especially her convo with Andrei at the end. Hmm ... can't wait to find out what all these pregnant silences are about!
Anyway, cheers for updating. :)
| Melany Emonte 1/16/12 . chapter 1
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE BEFORE I FLIPPING KILL YOU! 3 much love :)
| Kairi Swallowdown 1/8/12 . chapter 4
I really like the way your characters act, and Blake is awesome just please write some more as it's kinda got me hooked
| Chryse 1/6/12 . chapter 4
I like the new viewpoint with Kara, haha ... sounds like she means business, hmm? I think my favorite line might be "Not for the first time, she thanked whoever had thought to put a motor on a bicycle because they'd given her this." For some reason, it makes me giggle a bit. Maybe the image I get in my head.
Here's hoping you get bitten by your muse (if that's not mixing metaphors and mythology, what is ...) and update soon! :)
| Chryse 1/4/12 . chapter 3
Hmm ... the plot thickens? I'm kind of curious whether the school was like this (with the "gangs" and all) when the parents were there. It seems mildly concerning if it's one of those 'it's okay once you're inside' groups but looks mildly cult-ish from the outside ... if that makes sense.
Anyway, not sure if this is a typo, but kind of looks like it: "The teachers he had to figure that he'd meet the teachers when he started his classes Monday."
Likewise: "'I should tell Maryanne should know that you're wondering what the girls are like.'"
Hope you do keep updating this. It's interesting. :)
| Moon Witch 13 1/3/12 . chapter 2
Ooooh I liked it... Well Honestly I always like your writing. The story has peaked my interest, and I have a feeling that it involves... Something that starts with an S, and end with an o. I have to ask, did you ever get to publish Alex: White Tiger? If so please Pm me so I can find out how to get my hands on that thing, it's the best! Oh, and good story on Nephilim, Blake is cool. I just wanted to point out that the explanation of his powers was kinda just out a no where. Easing into it would have been a little easier to read... But then that's just me, can't wait to see more of Blake!
| Chryse 1/3/12 . chapter 2
Hmm ... so no one knows about Blake's colors, right? It seems like something he'd ask his parents about when he was a little kid.
I like the characters ... the roommates and the dialogue made me laugh. The biker gang element intrigues me. I'll be interested to see where you go with it.