I really liked the first stanza. I thought connecting repeating songs to history repeating itself was really interesting. The only thing is I might say car radio only because that would connect it better to the rest of the piece.

Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile)!

This has such a lovely rhythm to it, and I adore the line '(or maybe that's how the mind constructs decisions,)'

I really enjoyed the description. "(the chorus repeats these

regrets excessively)" I love that line, and just the way it sits perfectly with the poem.