|Reviews for Midnight Swallows and TV Cameras|
| Simplegift96 11/5/12 . chapter 45
It is the angst you mentioned! But completely understandable. :)
And, ahhh! I am finally caught up with Riker, Jeff and the whole gang! I wish they really have tumblr though ;(
"Not that is something we have never done"
But that is nothing major so..yeah :)
Just keep writing like you do, 's awesome! Can't wait for the next update!
| Simplegift96 10/31/12 . chapter 42
I am stuck in fictionpress world.. The end :D
Just a few nitpicks because I'm a prissy little nitpick nazi, or whatever :P
•Logan just giggled and wiggled around in Riker's arms as he dried her off."
•Riker laughed as he judged how shirt he should cut Darren's hair. (Shirt should be short I'm guessing, yeah?)
•waiting for the moment when Braxton was going to take off and jump at Darren like his normally did.
Are these the correction stuff that you were saying that you missed but saw when you read back on them?
You know what? I completely agree with Lily, Darren's so cute and adorable and he should not be ashamed of his ears.. Damn those kids who made fun of him *shakes fists in air* _
What I'm wondering though was when Alyssa took those pics of Riker and Darren. She like a ninja? o.O Clearly, I am currently obsessed with ninjas..
Lily's last comment? Perfect.
| Simplegift96 10/30/12 . chapter 41
This had me in fits of laughter. Like, everyone else is asleep in the house and here's me laughing like a freaking hyena..like a silent ninja! ...err, anyways.. You might wanna check out this sentence;
"She can go on and on for hours about how stupid with both were"
I think it was supposed to be "we" instead of "with" but that's it really. Nothing major.
Lovely chappie! ;D
| Simplegift96 10/29/12 . chapter 40
Riker and Jeff and crew...I MISSED YOU GUYS SO MUCH T_T How on earth did I manage to survive two months without you?
Okay, all drama inside, this chapter is adorable and lighthearted and boy do I need to get a good dose of that.. Yay :D
| Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 41
This is the best boyxboy I have ever read please upload soon
| Simplegift96 8/1/12 . chapter 39
Hello! I have finally caught up! Actually no, not yet because I still have to read that seperate story. But I am close! :D Anyway, just a few nitpicks because your story is just that perfect.
Think you just forgot a word here or something: "nodded once before looking back at the, quirking an eyebrow"
I think it was supposed to be Joey's name instead of Jeff's: "Selena and Jeff gasped out as"
Anyway, that's it. Ciao! :)
| Simplegift96 7/21/12 . chapter 38
I am super glad that Riker is back on medications and will be feeling better :) Although that whole scene with Alyssa and Curt and the promise rings is just hilarious and adorable :3 I still can't believe they haven't noticed anything until now. And it had to be pointed out to them! Also wtf? That is not the kind of thing you blog online, especially somewhere as public as Tumblr. That is messed up and I'm glad Riker told them off. I did not expect that though so well done you! :D
| Simplegift96 7/15/12 . chapter 37
How could you? T_T *hand hovering over the computer* No, I'm too sad for Riker. Selena too. How can they just kick her out? And four cuts? I can't even.. T_T
| Simplegift96 7/10/12 . chapter 36
Yes cuddling is good *head nod* I like the little tidbit you put it about Selena not being surprised about Riker's scars and Sabra's eyebrow raising. Subtle :)
| Simplegift96 7/10/12 . chapter 35
Holy sh* is right.. First it was..with no.. Which was expected yet not so expected.. Then it was the actual gift which made me go all "D'awwwww "" and finally it was the.. I can't believe.. I just went all mad crazy and shocked and everything else.. Wow. Best. Gift. Ever.
Oh, might just wanna check this bit "Rike rand" just something minor. It's somewhere near the end before selena left.. :)
| Simplegift96 6/25/12 . chapter 34
Ha! Selena you are awesome! :D Awww 's so cute Riker teaching Darren how to play the piano :3
| Simplegift96 6/18/12 . chapter 33
Awesome chapie :) Perfect Bday gift for Jeff ;) But whyw wouldn't he let Riker get him anything?
| FindnUrslfInLuv-LouisTomlinson 6/15/12 . chapter 33
Love this chapter! The pic is amazing!
| Simplegift96 6/4/12 . chapter 31
Ok, I said I'm going to disappear off the face of the earth for a good while but I can't help it! This is what keeps me sane during the dreadful times in which the torture of what we call "exams" are experienced. Anyways, TOTALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER! And well, really, I love this fic in general so..yeah. It made me laugh SO much! And yeah, if I haven't died because of those "torture" I'm about to receive, well I officially have because of all the fangirl goodness in this fic! Ohmygosh, I totally just saved the picture of Jeff and Riker from the previous chapter into my ipod..ADORKABLE!
...Ok, I'm just going to go disappear now..
| FindnUrslfInLuv-LouisTomlinson 5/25/12 . chapter 1
Liked this chapter! Those kids are gonna know too much sooner or later... xx