surprisingly hard-hitting for such a simple poem. nice.

I like how short this is, and the three things you've picked to not know, because they seem to span everything. I like the beginning, which seems to start in the middle of something, probably helped along by the lack of capitals, and I like the end, which finishes with a gunshot finality. I like it all. well done.

This is very good

fantastic. loved every bit of it.

I like how this is simple, yet holds some deeper meaning. And then I think the last word is hard-hitting and it just sums the rest up.

Random quesiotn; in the summary you said 'je ne sais pas.' Does that mean 'I don't know' in Frenh, or am I totally wrong.