|Reviews for The Danger Game|
| TazanaSacari 1/14/12 . chapter 1
Very well written and descriptive Jenna!
| DaylightGold 1/8/12 . chapter 1
Ah, very nice start to your story! I wonder why he needed to leave to badly.
Although, and I say this with all respect, me thinks that his mother's silence to him leaving was too abrupt, I mean it was a very sudden change because one moment she was angry and yelling at him and then very suddenly, even though you wrote that she was in alot of pain, she was silent.
If you were to ever edit this maybe you could have her still voice her want for him to stay but more gently.
But you know what? That is the only thing that kind of bugged me, other then that, so far (hehe), this story is awesome!
Very interesting and exciting, and its only the first chapter!
I really am looking forward to reading more! D
I wish you the best of luck! _