|Reviews for Not Your Normal Vacation|
| Ray Kremson 4/17/12 . chapter 6
Awesome Chapter! I am really curious about that Chu fellow... Personally, I think this story should have a load more reviews than it already does. Please update soon, and if you don't that's alright.
| Ray Kremson 1/27/12 . chapter 5
Awesome, very well done. The only thing that I was a little confused about in the end, was if Isabelle's parents belonged to one of those government agencies that were mentioned before. That was the only part a little unclear to me.
| Ray Kremson 1/11/12 . chapter 4
Nice Chapter! I was hoping for a bit more on Isabelle, but I'm glad that Jesse is alright. With their old hideout gone, I'm really curios as to what they do next.
| Ray Kremson 1/7/12 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm impressed! This is really good so far, I can't wait until you upload more. I really like the characters and the idea of the story. Nice cliff hanger at the end of the first chapter, I can't wait for the explanation! I know this might not be suitable for a review, but you could you please reed my "Kenton Ullinskov, Book 1: Chicago" story and review it?