Awesome Chapter! I am really curious about that Chu fellow... Personally, I think this story should have a load more reviews than it already does. Please update soon, and if you don't that's alright.

Awesome, very well done. The only thing that I was a little confused about in the end, was if Isabelle's parents belonged to one of those government agencies that were mentioned before. That was the only part a little unclear to me.

Nice Chapter! I was hoping for a bit more on Isabelle, but I'm glad that Jesse is alright. With their old hideout gone, I'm really curios as to what they do next.

Wow, I'm impressed! This is really good so far, I can't wait until you upload more. I really like the characters and the idea of the story. Nice cliff hanger at the end of the first chapter, I can't wait for the explanation! I know this might not be suitable for a review, but you could you please reed my "Kenton Ullinskov, Book 1: Chicago" story and review it?