Very good poem, and very true message. I'm not sure I'd take this as far as you do, but I agree Ritalin is definitely some fucked up shit. Thanks for giving us such a beautiful voice.

Even though I read the rough draft, this seems even better. [:

There is a lot of emotion in it, which is obvious, but either way.

Keep it up!

ps

"Do you see us as human?

Or statistics?

A threat to your corruption?

Or test, subjects?"

I really like that line. c;

WOW! I love this-especially the idea of it.