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| Reviews for Fallen Angel |
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   Beautifully Corrupted 10/15/12 . chapter 3It is a little bit fast paced and the writing is really light maybe you should add some more detail into it also you should probably put a little more dialog but other wise it is really really good! |
| LionessZen 5/9/12 . chapter 1 You have the seeds of a good story here. FWIW, I would suggest that it would help the flow of your tale to correct the typos because they are a distraction. Look forward to reading more:) |
| Kitty-Kat bebe 4/12/12 . chapter 37 THose androids! Shit! This was a really epic chapter! I'm looking forward to part two of this story! :D:D |
| darkphoenix1836 4/12/12 . chapter 37 Wow, it was cool that Jason's mom joined in on the fight. And damn, Jason got taken :c I hope Christina and the others can save him! I'm glad no one died, though. My heart stopped when you made it seem like Jason died xD Intense cliffhanger; can't wait to see what will happen next! |
| Kitty-Kat bebe 4/9/12 . chapter 36 Uh oh, this really is not looking good. I'm wondering how they're going to finish off Boss once and for all! |
| darkphoenix1836 4/7/12 . chapter 36 Damn, the angels got their asses kicked! And thank you for telling me why Jason's father is a dick. :) and lol, yeah seriously, where were their guardians? xD |
| Kitty-Kat bebe 4/7/12 . chapter 35 aww i feel so bad for Jason's mom! Hopefully they can save her somehow! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
| darkphoenix1836 4/2/12 . chapter 35 I would like to know why Jason's father is so evil. There must be a reason as to why he's cruel to his own wife and son. Anyway, nice short chapter. Hope all turns out well. |
| darkphoenix1836 4/2/12 . chapter 34 Aw, I smiled when Jason was giving Christina her present[s] :) It was adorable of him to give her a necklace and a cell phone! And damn the Commander to interrupt their moment lol, but I'm glad they got back to it afterwards. |
| YoungCresentMoon 4/1/12 . chapter 35 Love this chapter update as soon as you can XD |
| Kitty-Kat bebe 4/1/12 . chapter 34 awww cute chapter :) Jason is awesome! :D But that commander guy if freakin annoying DX i hope they can figure out how to stop him soon. |
| Kitty-Kat bebe 4/1/12 . chapter 33 Sweet lol :) I like the band. (I've never played piano in my life but that's okay XDD ) on to the next! |
| YoungCresentMoon 4/1/12 . chapter 34 Its getting better hehe Angel knew the part with madison was funny XD but upate soon plz ASAP |
| YoungCresentMoon 3/28/12 . chapter 33 Xd when you put Angelz its like you ment Angel |
| darkphoenix1836 3/28/12 . chapter 33 lol cool chapter. would be funny if Jason had sung as well xD |
