|Reviews for Yellowish|
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 11
And a perfect poem to get me into deep thought
Love you :3
You write such amazing work!
Keep it up and seruisly pm if you type more stuff cuz I haven't been checking my email in forever but I do check pms
Anyways love these poems more than the smell of popcorn!
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 10
Haha I'm left handed!
Not a curse but an very unique comparison of it
I would never think of that
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 9
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 8
All originally amazing
Amd one disturbing
But the rest are fantastically perfect!
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 7
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 6
Lolz i get this strange image of an old guy (80) eating a jar of the baby food mashed peaches!
Really greet poem though ;)
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 5
Beautiful images come to mind
It's an amazing one!
(and I thought nothing could top the last hehe)
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 4
Serra toy ends with a bang
I love the cleverness and Catchiness of this!
My fave poem so far :D
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 3
Are the two eyes he sun and the moon or was it the eyes gazing into the views of Europe
Love the poem
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 2
This ones interesting and makesme wonder what exactly is going into that mouth.
Which is why you're a wicked amazing writter!
| BookcraZzaY 3/18/12 . chapter 1
Haha love this! :3
| josephdavisonduddles 1/8/12 . chapter 1
I don't enjoy Haikus but this is brilliant. Blunt but with so much imagery packed in too, I love it.
| Nandiferd 1/8/12 . chapter 1
The first poem reminds me of Basho (eg. Eaten alive by lice and fleas-now the horse beside my pillow pees). LOL.
The second one I got. I used to smoke and everything tasted fuzzy afterwards.
Thanks for sharing, Nandi.