|Reviews for Breakdown|
| To M From the author 3/5/12 . chapter 1
Meh, M. Meh.
| Me 2/22/12 . chapter 1
You told me to review. I am doing a great kindness here.
| Hopeful-Future 1/12/12 . chapter 1
The two lines
"And I'm using 'and'
Way too much."
works as a great little break in the middle of this anxiety attack of a poem. I think that for an unpolished poem, you did a great job.
| True Talker 1/11/12 . chapter 1
Okay, are you okay? Seriously. Do you want to talk? Yes, I am asking.