Meh, M. Meh.

You told me to review. I am doing a great kindness here.

Hehe. JK.

-M

The two lines

"And I'm using 'and'

Way too much."

works as a great little break in the middle of this anxiety attack of a poem. I think that for an unpolished poem, you did a great job.

Okay, are you okay? Seriously. Do you want to talk? Yes, I am asking.