awww:) this was just so adorable:) i loved it!:3

It's pretty obvious that they don't like kissing hahaha:))

i love this story..it is so cute and i love how you add humor into the story by using Derek..looking forward to your other stories:)

This story is just so sweet! There is nothing quite like new love... it's so exciting and you feel like everything's going to be wonderful forever :) Also Derek is completely hilarious.

This was really cute. I slightly more focused on the future right now so I was just wondering if the passion they have now will last let's say 10 years from now. I'd hope so.

I got kinda lost in time with the story but I think it worked well. Because you always lose track of time with things like love ect.

Love the story!

*Ngoc1231*