|Reviews for They Killed Honor|
| Small Wings Flying 7/15/12 . chapter 1
This has got quite a strong rhythm; I like it. Really suits the words and the ideas you're presenting. Structure-wise, having everything past the second stanza veer off to the right is somewhat unnerving, particularly on a wide screen. I don't see why that's necessary, and as a result it's quite distracting.
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