|Reviews for The Beyond|
| phantom130 5 4/28/13 . chapter 11
Poor Maria. Her and Xander would have been really cute together :3
| phantom130 5 2/23/13 . chapter 10
"Don't you dare say anything like that to me ever again! You had a responsibility which you threw away for a girl you had just met. Let me break it to you Romeo, I don't trust you. You have lied, you tell me things and expect me to believe you without proof, and then you insulted me. No more Xander. I don't care if you think I'm your souls "other half"," she rolled her eyes at that. "That might work on other girls but it will not work on me! Tell me how to get to the ball. I do not wish to arrive with you."
I love Maria, because she really speaks her mind. You don't see that enough in stories :P
| phantom130 5 2/23/13 . chapter 9
She wanted to protect Nate and protect what they had. She sighed, knowing he was always saving her. For once she wished she could save him...
Love that line.
| phantom130 5 2/16/13 . chapter 8
LOL loved the little interruption in the middle of the of the chapter where you talked about how hungry you were XD
Also darn you for giving me a cliff hanger XD
| phantom130 5 2/15/13 . chapter 7
Well it has been a while since I was able to read this story or since you updated this chapter, but I must say your writing is still amazing and that chapter was worth the wait. I'm loving the character development and not sure why, but I loved the scene where Maria compares herself to Juliet.
| Jakel Christopher 2/12/13 . chapter 10
So far I REALLY love this story... update soon please.
| CRAZEDbySUGAR 1/4/13 . chapter 10
I still hate Kiara :P
| CRAZEDbySUGAR 1/4/13 . chapter 9
XD haha I love the title of this chapter!
and YAY! he's okayX3
ooooo I seeXD -"She wanted to protect Nate and protect what they had. She sighed, knowing he was always saving her. For once she wished she could save him..."
sooo is there hinting some foreshadowing? :D hehe
and now they are in the Fey...finallyXD
| CRAZEDbySUGAR 12/29/12 . chapter 8
OH NOES NATE! D:
Jade LOOK OUT DX
...why you must end on cliffy Kait...WHY!?
| m4Sean 12/23/12 . chapter 7
Danng I would of been mad to wait 9 months for this chapter. This one was OK overrall. It was good to see the time skipps but you should of split it up more so I or the readers could get ready for the time skipps.
| m4Sean 12/23/12 . chapter 6
emmm... smh... noooo... Sorry this chapter wasnt me. You got dude over her engaged with a princess which I kind of saw coming. When goodfellow raised his eyebrow I figured he did something because he is of mischief. Maria my girl over here getting her heart broken I like the build up to that point rather than skipping to it. Which I would of did cause I suck at build ups. Xander... Lmao im sorry he's now worse than edward from twilight. At least edward didnt lie.
| m4Sean 12/22/12 . chapter 5
hmm I honestly still don't like jade. And yeah Xander to me is now The Beyond's version of Edward from twilight. And When the sandy wolf revealed his name I literally said "Oh Shvit the darker half" My my you have one huge imagination because this world has so many things going on to where its crazy. Interesting chapter.
| m4Sean 12/22/12 . chapter 4
Lmao what is going on? Talking lions and wolfs running all over the place I was so confused for a minute. I like the explanation with the sorcerers witches and mages tho. The pacing of the chapter was great. Xander seems like Edward from twlight. I really hope you didnt model him after THAT guy lol. Good chapter
| m4Sean 12/22/12 . chapter 3
Wooow the image in my mind when they morphed everything into a weapon was pretty beast. I can see a possible love interest coming with maria and xander. idk im behind a few chapters so who knows. Overall it was a good chapter and im glad you separated maria from the pack because I like her character.
| m4Sean 12/21/12 . chapter 2
WOah! one person isn't returning? Got me wondering, I have it in this order for who might not returen... Silvermoon! lol jk it goes Nate,Maria then Jade. Idk I dont like jade right now because she was useless during the goropetra fight. This getting even more interesting as I read. I hope I can hurry and catch up