|Reviews for Vanity Fever|
| SmashedIce.X 1/15/12 . chapter 1
I think I can see why you creeped yourself out a bit writing this. I do think it's very cleverly written, and an interesting contradiction as you said. It's very good, almost scarily good.
| Serenity's Human 1/15/12 . chapter 1
I like the line "am I ugly yet?" was so not expecting that.
I love how this is about a person who instead of trying to be more beautiful rather be more ugly. Going and doing everything she can in hopes of becoming this ugly person. Perhaps because she was such a beautiful person and it had caused her so much pain or perhaps because of something else. Only to turn around and ask "Am I perfect yet?" almost given a twist if she is there to once again become pretty or if she finally found herself beautiful. Either way I LOVE this!
If you have time, could you review my story:
I know it says 9 chapters but because I couldn't figure out how to do a line break... I ended up breaking the sections into 'chapters' so it's not even that long. I believe one chapter was 2 paragraphs :P
Thanks ahead of time.