Why aren't you finishing the story? :(

looks like every single teenager I know of has become a fan of 'one direction'! :/ But seriously, nice change. It's something different! though your grammar gets me confused several times! Please please make those grammatical changes!

UPDATE! Can't leave me on a cliffhanger like that!

That makes sense.. but I still go with Lily. I mean, can't people tell each other that they love each other but not become girlfriend and boyfriend?

LOVE this chapter! Finally the other side of Travis. I can't form a good picture of Erica. She almost looked like lily in the end there. Do you think you could paint a more specific picture of her the next time she comes up?

I'm guessing the "him" is Edwin

That was such a heart warming chapter! I love how sweetly he threatened Edwin.

i can hardly tell Nate and Lily are together.

That was adorable! I didn't expect the competition to come so quickly though

Hayley's little date was adorable. I'd love to go to a place like that. Will there be more of Lucas and Clair? I really enjoy their cute awkwardness

I LOVE these story's there so good, but I can feel someone is going to happen to nate or lily or Nate AND lily, congrats youve got me hooked. Update soon!

Even though the last part wasn't so overly emotional, it brought tears to my eyes. It was so sweet.

I know I'm reviewing too many times and annoying you but I just wanted to let you know that I love the turn of events now! The story is completely sweet right now!

Manh! Finish the story fast! There aren't much spelling and grammar mistakes so i'm actually beginning to enjoy reason your story now! :)

If only this could actually be a real movie.

It would be my favorite/most loved movie ever.