I'm adding this story to my favoritea bar and will gleefully check every day for an update! This is one of the best stories I've read on fictionpress. It's quite raw ans realistic. I REALLY hope you update soon. Please :)?

This is a great story and wow you have a lot of stories! One thing in the last sentence is that 'you' supposed to be there?

Wow...Nathan is just awful. He should wake up already.

This is really well written! I'm curious to see where this goes...

so update!

oh and check out mine?

s/2987713/1/Beauty_and_the_Jock

Your story yes, I will read and critique another time, been awake for 2 days. I am staying awake, eyes heavy, and past hurt poems and I was emotional. That is it, all is okay. Again No sleep for 2 days affects me...

I will take note of who wrote this...