|Reviews for The Devil Walks Into A Bar|
| NizumiBreathes 1/18/12 . chapter 1
I like this story, especially the idea behind this.
But you have some mistakes in the tense as in:
"...if someone was trying to tear it apart. The ground cracks before Paul's..."
You switch from past to present; you have that a few times, but you can easily fix that. )
Oh, and I love the part where the demon says, "Would you like a brain, Scarecrow?" XD
And, last but not least, I like the ending. o-o
Good job. -