|Reviews for Reunions are a Bitch|
| Alaeryel 9/23/12 . chapter 33
Purple-I WILL DEFINITELY BE WAITING THEN AND COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND! It was just my curiosity and worry over it. I will be looking forward to the new edition of this story when it is ready to repost and also for the new one you are working on! Here is wishing everything goes smoothly for you!
| Draconian Phoenix 9/19/12 . chapter 27
I yell in frustration at Teresa, lol. She's so all over the place with her temper. Again, Michael is so sweet. I can't believe he took it all so well, must be the stiff upper-lipped Brit in him.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/19/12 . chapter 26
Michael is so sweet. Although now that I think about it, I feel kind of lost about his feelings. Why does he like her so much after just one date and then not talking/seeing each other for like a week?
| Draconian Phoenix 9/19/12 . chapter 24
There's a lot of stuff going on here. Wow that last couple of chapters were a shocker.
I got confused at one part though...Maria says Teresa went to Columbia but then there's was the thing about not knowing if she went? Along with that, was the father supposed to have been in Columbia?
Also, they both jump around with the anger and stuff. I guess this is the right time to be irrational.
And I'm curious to know more about Teresa. She seems to have some very negative opinions about herself and I'd like to find out why.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 20
They both get so angry and defensive so quickly. They're gonna need to do quite a bit of emotional maturing if their relationship is going to have any chance of surviving.
Again, for someone who loves Teresa, Rob doesn't show it. I wish he would think about her feelings but I guess he's not that type of hero. Somehow that leaves me disappointed, lol. I guess it just shows my bias of what I think a romance lead should be like. Rob keeps me on edge though. I keep wondering if there will be some kind of transformation.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 19
Short but good. This was what I was talking about with hearing more of what's going on in the characters. It'd be good to have a bit more of this as things are happening and they're dialoguing with each other.
| mylittlePRINCESS 9/17/12 . chapter 32
please update soon.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 16
So he did sleep with that other girl? Rob's a jerk. He gets all mad at Teresa for looking at his texts but he was the one that was leading the other girl on and sending inappropriate texts. Maybe it's because they were 16 or something...but he should learn to take responsibility for his part now.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 15
The last few chapters has been interesting and answered some of my questions before about how their relationship was and how feelings developed. But I still feel like there's an issue with continuity. Last chapter Teresa is apologizing for not believing Rob and assuming he was sleeping with that girl. Now in this one she's mad again and assuming he slept with that girl. It seems like they were ready to actually talk to each other but then Teresa gets mad again. I guess I just feel like how the characters are acting are jumping around a bit without something to bridge the changes.
Also, I agree with other reviews about editing. There are usually words missing or the wrong word or words misspelled. It make it harder to read.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 8
Okay. Continuity again...Teresa says she's 21. But earlier there's something about how she hasn't seen Rob since high school 6 years ago...usually people are like 17/18 when they finish high school so she should be like 23/24. Or even if it's just been 6 years since they broke up Teresa says in the first chapter she was 16 so she'd still be 22 right now. Sorry if I'm nitpicking at stuff but having things be consistent is important to me.
Also now since I went back to chapter 1, I realized that Teresa's and Rob's high school relationship wasn't really described. She went out with him to get him to stop stalking her and then all of a sudden the rumor is they're a couple so she just keeps going out with him and then she thinks she loves him...enough that even seeing him kiss a girl 6 years later it kind of breaks her heart. How did this happen? Maybe you explain it in a later chapter but if that's the chase I think you should have Teresa say something about how she doesn't want to think about how that happened or something.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 6
I feel like I'm missing something again. Teresa says she really likes Michael but I didn't get that impression from their date. It seemed like she got so distracted by the fact that Rob showed up that she couldn't really enjoy the date after that so they just had random chitchat. I guess I'm always looking for reasons or trying to see where something came from. I think it would have been good to hear more about Teresa's reaction to the date or have her talk about why she likes him so much.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/17/12 . chapter 5
A couple of things I noticed for continuity's sake.
In the last chapter it said Michael was leaving for 3 weeks and in this one it says two weeks.
The last chapter also says the trip is to visit him mom but this one says it's a business and he'll conveniently visit him mom.
Also, I thought they already talked about what he does for a living in ch 4 but here it sounds like Teresa didn't know that. Maybe they didn't go into as much detail?
Also, as I went back to check chapter 4 I realized a few other things. Teresa thought the date wasn't that exciting after Rob showed up but then it said the night was over before she wanted it to. And the text from Maria said sorry but I found out Rob works there. But then she says I hope you see him. Those things seem to contradict each other.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/16/12 . chapter 4
HAHA. I knew Rob was going to pop up. Let's see what hair-tearing thing happens with him.
| Draconian Phoenix 9/14/12 . chapter 2
i'm slowly making my way through people's stories. figured if they could read mine then i can read theirs. unfortunately i can only read until here tonight. it's very entertaining so far though. the characters seem very relatable. at one part i totally thought teresa was gonna end up going on a blind date with rob...although who knows, maybe it is him! i'll have to find out...as soon as i finish my last chapter.
| deadkitty1 9/14/12 . chapter 32
T_T SO touching! I'm sure neither of them want their friendship to fall apart in the end. It would be an insult to their relationship.