Purple-interesting start and haven't most of us been in that situation before. I am on to read more to get a better feel of the story but it is very promising.

please update soon.

Sorry for not reviewing for the last few chapters. I don't know what made me stop pressing that button because they were good chapters. I really wanted to review the last chapter, I'm serious. I was using my phone and I typed up a really really long review, summing up my thoughts in previous chapters, and the something happened and the page refreshed and I didn't bother typing it again because I got pissed. Sorry.

But I'm reviewing this one so that's what matters, right?

I liked this chapter, as I did the others. I enjoyed reading about their small teasing moments, like the paragraph where she called him a perv. I think you should always have those little moments (unless they have a proper argument).

About the way Teresa reacts to everything. I think she's making the right decision to give Robert another chance. And from what I read, they seem made for each other. Which is why I don't understand why she was so fussed over Michael in the first place. I mean it's still the first date right? I just don't think Teresa seems realistic to be worried about Michael so much, even if she is an innocent soul and doesn't wanna hurt his feelings. It's not gonna kill him, he'll get over it. How many guys fall in love with a girl on the first date?

Maybe Teresa could re-think who to choose. Michael or Robert? Michael being a proper gentlemen and a secure job, sounds like a good competition. She could remember how much she liked him? Because at the moment it seems she's forgotten that and she's only worried about letting him down.

I'm sorry if my review upsets you in any way but I am just telling you what I feel about this chapter and Teresa. I hope I helped you in some kind of way. And you don't need to take everything I say on board because I'm not some expert.

This story is going great, I hope to see more of it soon. Thanks for the update!

Love what your doing with the story...please update soon

awesome!

Aww, but the good tines wont last for long, that other guy is coming back (I forgot his name -_-) next chappy plz :)

So wait... I'm trying to piece this all together. Robert's mom had an affair with Teresa's father which would mean that Teresa & Robert are basically half-siblings? Am I getting that right? Or was Robert's mom talking about another dude that knocked her up and Teresa's father was just there to pick up the pieces? I have no problem with them being half-siblings and in love but wouldn't they have a problem with that? They didn't address it any way at all! XD So much drama.

I kinda felt this went too fast. At least in my opinion. I mean Micheal wasn't even there to try to get in between the couple and win Teresa back. Robert has a lot to prove to Teresa in order to change her mind about him and for Teresa to see her feelings towards him more. I'm sure both of them know by now that they're not over each other but does that feeling alone propel themselves to be a couple immediately?

I like how Teresa reacted when she found about about Robert's texts. Her mother might not like all the things she broke but I'm sure she understands. And Robert's reaction to being misunderstood is very realistic too.

OH GOD, you got me with that end! thing, but now i know xD

well i cant wait for the next chapter(:

Im proud of her, most girls go after the hoe and never the guy. Good chapter :)

i had a feeling this would happen! dammit all Dx its all that dumb girls fault :[

update again soon!

I'm glad they are finally talking and working things out...yay!

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I LOVE IT!

Even though this chapter was ultra short (!) I absolutely loved it. I think this is one of your best chapters yet, I love everything from talking a little about Teresa's past to her doubts and worries. It was so perfect!

im surprised how soft she is here!

I think your POV of Robert improved tremendously. He sounds more like the tough guy I envisioned but it seems Maria may have lost some of her spunk. Must suck being stuck in-between her bestfriend & her brother.

As for Rosa's POV, I thought it was unnecessary. She's not really an important character. The focus should be only be with Teresa & Robert.

It's nice to see what's in both of their heads and they seem to both carry strong personalities. I can only imagine how big of an argument they got during their breakup. Again, the story can use a good edit but I guess you can do all that once you finish the whole story. Also for the chapter when they meet the parents, I expected more information about Teresa & Robert than dialogue between Robert & her parents. The threatening from the father was funny but I just wanted to know more about what Robert thought of her, her family, and how he fits in it. Like on the 14th chapter where Teresa exposes her thoughts, that's what I wanted from Robert but it's cool. The dialogue was fun.

:/ Robert texting another girl & playing with her feelings is sort of mean but it does seem like something he'd do. Doesn't mean I have to like it. Haha! Ugh! I just annoys me...