|Reviews for The Deserters|
| h earthserpent 6/14/13 . chapter 22
:D goody update. bring on the next one please.
| Yelissa Sisneros 2/21/13 . chapter 1
When will you update? Liking this alot. Id like to see more if you're still updating, as the two other stories I'm following got dropped. Please don't disappoint me by stopping this story. I can see alot of myself in Valentine, and I think that's why I like it so much. She kicks ass! I'm not being impatient, just post if you plan to continue. I promise I'll review regularly. Yelly
| Guest 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Loving this store so much. Cant wait ti the next chapter. Im at the end.
| Beverlee Allen 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Good story. Read through all of the chapters, but decided to leave the review on chapter one. Not sure how this works or if you will get this. I am new to this site and I am choosing stories randomly. Really glad I found this one. Read a couple of other authors as well, but their stories were choppy and jumped around, and I couldn't keep track of what was happening. Not so with yours, you manage the pace very well. Enjoyed this very much. Thank you. Bev
| RachaelIssmo 10/9/12 . chapter 16
I've planned to stick with this story until the conclusion. You're not planning on stopping the story short, are you? Sorry for lack of review, as I needed to get my internet reconnected for lack of funds for awhile. Coming along nicely. You didnt lose audience here-. Sometimes lack of review could mean either: 1: laziness, 2: no money for internet access, or 3: with my story sometimes I didnt get a review until people read a few chapters and then grouped them. Not that I got alot a reviews, maybe about 10 total but my story sucked. Keep up the pace and your doing great.
| RachaelIssmo 8/16/12 . chapter 13
Still keeping up with the story, and I can't wait to see what's next. When's the next chapter coming?
| WhiteWolfAsoka 7/29/12 . chapter 12
Like I've seen this story compared to in other reviews, this is a badass, action novel indeed. I'm really liking how the plot is going as well as how the point of view is arranged. And the reality of it all, since it occurs in 2013, could very well happen. It's a possibility.
I have to say, I am having a war with myself choosing between Priest and Cassie as my favorite character. I probably like them both, and probably will to the end if something doesn't pop up. Danny is definitely the character that keeps that cheerful mood to the group and acts as the reasonable sort. Logan... he just seems like an ass to me. Which just makes him funny in his own little way; if that makes any sense.
One thing I think I remember noticing... You said you don't know dialogue format of some sort? Correct me if I'm wrong. But, I will tell you that with each new person speaking you would begin a new paragraph. So pretty much dialogue would make your chapter longer since it takes up such a large space in brief sentences if it's a conversation.
That being said, the plot is progressing well and, again, I'm really enjoying reading it in my free time. Update soon if you can! And no, I didn't know that no food is originally blue. I just learned something new today. :)
| Destinashenowher 7/16/12 . chapter 11
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice! This is a badass story. I don't write myself, but do a lota reading and this is good.
| RachaelIssmo 7/13/12 . chapter 10
Havent reviewed in a while, cause my computer virused. Now noticed another chapter, so let me get caught up.
| L.Lang1212 6/10/12 . chapter 1
Good story so far. Read chapter 1 and 2, and getting ready to read further today. I like your style of writing-not typical of most female writers. Story was recommended to me by another reader, but he doesn't review so I thought I would. Liking the story so far, so keep it up. Laurence.
| RachaelIssmo 6/8/12 . chapter 9
Kept checking back for updates, thanks! I'm reviewing before actually reading just to say thank you for the chapter. Now get to work writing more... :) Sorry-addicted I am!
| RachaelIssmo 4/21/12 . chapter 7
Thanks for the nod! I can't help it, I really enjoy your writing. I find that I can relate to the character, in that I'm not a sugar sweet typical girl. Females can be dangerous, too. Keep up the good work.
| RachaelIssmo 4/2/12 . chapter 6
Ok, now I now I have a crush on the main character, and I really really want that dog Jett.
| RachaelIssmo 3/27/12 . chapter 5
Thanks for the update. More! Think I have a crush on the main character. Have you tried promoting on the forums site? More people will have access to your story.
| Binarygeek 3/22/12 . chapter 5
Enjoy the longer chappy. I've got to go back and re-read, but thanks for the update. I'm good with the Danny character-he's a nice addition to the storyline. Can't wait to read more!