I am happy to say I know both of these people. Thy are both wonderful.

I think it's lovely, and I'm actually thankful that there was a problem with uploading. I feel like I have a better understanding after the second read, and it's even better.

Like, I just realized the pattern you used, with the question at the end of each paragraph.

It's very short, but also very emotional and easy to relate to.

I really enjoyed it, and I'm going to add it to my favorites, so I can remember to read it again sometime. (To see what it's like the third time and such.)

Brilliant work. :)