Wow this is just, beautiful. Really truly beautiful :)

Once again another awesome poem. Seriously yours are some of the best :D

I love the ending. At first I was like oh no, she's going to kill herself, but then I'm like awesome she's saved! Amazing job! :D

awwwwhappy ending Yay

lol I'm going to go to google translate to see what those 2 sentences mean

:D this is awesome, I hope you continue on writing poems:3

CbS

breathtaking and intriguing, you bring very interesting elements to this :D

Write always and Forever,

DarknessesDownfall