You know to tell u the truth sometimes I wonder if their is such a thing such as Hell or Heaven, or if it's something we just assume exist. Nobody never really knows the truth so how can we say there is such a place. If not is it just like the world we live in know, or is it just a nothingness just a void. Can we be sure to believe in the Holy Bible, cause we never really know if it's a lie. Just something somebody decided to make. Nobody knows for sure and if so then we shall just have to wait for our time to see if it's the truth.

This is written quite well and if I dwell on my past then this will be the way I am feeling. No more dwelling, may it be gone, my past was about loss, and my future can be by the cross - meaning good. Don't mind me apparently I feel like a nut- (just joking) I feel like rhyming today.

Very good piece here as always. My favourite is the third stanza because I can relate to it so much. Keep writing, you're so good at it!

Anna _

Loved it :)