Hi! I love this oneshot! And I love the last line, about the sun and the ocean and how they meet in the end. It's beautifully written! (:

Ohmygoodness.

You, my friend, are an awesome-sauce writer.

Did you know that? Because you are.

Keep on writing. :D

BRILLIANT! thats all i have to say:D

That was very interesting in the best way possible, and it was wonderfully applied. I like it.