I really like this chapter!

family wasnt assassinated if they werent famous- they were murdered. assassinated is for famous ppl. just saying.

and btw... why would gabriel talk to alex and... jayden when the police were all around him? and he wudent die of a stab mark so soon... wait nvm i take that back.

just saying.

WHEN IS CHAPTER THREE COMING? YOU'VE BEEN "WORKING" ON IT FOR-EVA! ...i am going to bug you. and you know it. anyways, i loved it as always! it was really really really really really really- a million more really's- good.

Wow, this was an amazing story. You portrayed the characters really well and I almost cried when she told the story of Gaberial. This is written very well and it was a joy to read. But, one thing... I totally hate the cliff hanger! I can't want to read more! :D

Rin

OMGE i looooooooove it. And you already know that. :DDD but seriously HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

...and for the millionth time do not use that word. You should know the word I'm talking about. -_- anyways, IT WAS AH-MAZING!

lemme guess: austin poker

jayden ...

jackson ...

emi LOL

danielle anishia

delilah ignatius

I LOVE NOODLES