I loved your story so much. Im kind of sad its over... But it was fantastic!

:) This was an interesting and nice story... lots of morals haha :P

Nice work!

awww i'm so sad this is over!
but i'm so proud of you(:
i know i only started this a little bit ago, but i loved it a lot and i'm so glad you wrote it!(:
i love that they all got together in the end and fixed what was wrong. and i never would have seen kat/kyle's baby coming! the ending was perfect!(:

Kyle was Soo Soo sweet :)

nooooo! its over?):
but what about kyle and kate?
and naomi and leo?
this cant be it!
the epilogues better be fantastic!
ok rant over(:
i looooove this.
you are an amazing writer.
the only real critique i have is that everything seems to happen really fast, so fast that it isn't quite realistic. and i realize that if its love at first sight or whatevs, then its bound to be fast, but still, a lot of the plot just seemed to speed on by!
but nonetheless, i loved this. a lot. like you dont even know.
you're great.
kthxbaii. :D

I like the ending of chapter 29, sweet and funny :)

It's so sad what happened to Kyle and Matt!

Nice cover for the whole "I'm dating Leo-nardo..." I was cracking up. :)

Haha! Liked the ending. :D and I LOVED the 1st part where Leo was textin Naomi :D more please! :D it is really good!

Cool chapter! I really like Leo at the moment :D

OMG! This story is amazing! You need to update really soon cos I need to know what happens! :D loved it ]

Interesting start!

Flows nicely & I can tell this is gonna be good (:

Keep writing! I'll be waiting for the update!

-Heather

I like this so far, though I do wonder what else both gangs do. I also love star-crossed lovers, and lots of cute scenes between Naomi and Leo began to flood thru my head right after I finished reading the first chapter. Unless of course Naomi suddenly likes Kyle. That would be surprising. ))

Hope you update soon!