Well written. The wording is striking. I like it.

I really enjoy the Major Arcana imagery. I am familiar with the feeling of someone defining me; helping me to create myself.

Also, your pen name, Phibonacci. I like it.

I love how you write about people defining you; giving you identity (at least, that is what I think this is about. Also, I accidentally wrote the previous sentence with 'I love you' rather than 'I love how'. Hmm.), and I'm floored by your imagery. Highly impressed with all your writing, really.

a beautiful ending, really an admirable and artful way to make the ends meet. no matter it's length, it is terribly sweet.