I have to say you improved. Though I cringe your grammar errors and need for paragraphs I must say this is an upgrade. I don't want to be harsh but I didn't really like Bitten all that much, with all the Werewolf and Vampire kitcsh (Thank Twilight). But believe me I was NOT disappointed. Add another chapter, I'm looking forward to what's going to happen to the Sagittarius ;) (Bow, quiver, and arrows? Pure Sagittarian trademark!)